Pitching Feedback for Static

The positive feedback that we got was that was that the idea was unusual but good we were also told that we was quite confident and we covered all the points that we needed to cover. The negative point were that the title sequence was confusing and people believed that it would be hard to accomplish,we believe the we can make the title sequence well, it sounds confusing when it is vocally presented and will become more apparent when it is filmed and can be shown visually.