marking past students work- the last pulse

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ngA_V0Bihg&feature=plcp&context=C391caf7UDOEgsToPDskLXkqZly3JeMQmaIPu-r3vb

1. the film only looked like a horror in one part where the girl kills him
2. there where some good shots useing different angles
3. bad frameing, always to much space around the person in the shot
4. continuioty errors
5. good use of props, but location didnt make scence and the final part didnt fit in to the film
6. the acoustic gitar didnt create fear and  no sound efects where used

i gave this film 36 as it was show well but was let down by errors and mise en scene